Tuesday, January 16, 2024

jan 16

behind on the promises
i made to myself

the ice at my door
makes no promises

for how much longer,
for what it wants

1 comment:

  1. Oh boy "behind on the promises/i made to myself" great couplet. Not sure if one should if you mean to catch up or make fewer promises. And I like the positive side of ice too. Dont get the third stanza - yet.

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